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bigDman
01-23-2005, 12:48 PM
of this lacrosse backrounds i made
constructiver critizsm thankful
let me know what you think
http://community.webshots.com/album/257571405HdUZJS

thanks

for you lazy people
http://img171.exs.cx/img171/1711/amymargethingie6jv.th.gif (http://img171.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img171&image=amymargethingie6jv.gif)
http://img183.exs.cx/img183/2366/backrround19ur.th.gif (http://img183.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img183&image=backrround19ur.gif)
http://img170.exs.cx/img170/3323/whitebackround1tc.th.jpg (http://img170.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img170&image=whitebackround1tc.jpg)
http://img166.exs.cx/img166/9917/mikesattempt0ny.th.jpg (http://img166.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img166&image=mikesattempt0ny.jpg)

heres one for you ourburst no quotes just golies!!(are you still sending me thos pics... im waiting)
http://img177.exs.cx/img177/5866/paulsjownthehe9ju.th.gif (http://img177.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img177&image=paulsjownthehe9ju.gif)

livin4lax09
01-23-2005, 12:55 PM
coming from a photographer...it's MUCH too busy. There's too much distraction, as in your eyes have trouble finding one thing to focus on, they aretrying to look at everything.

bigDman
01-23-2005, 12:56 PM
thats what my brother says I was going to make one with onle 2-3 pictures that are bigger... thanks for the response

mdawg
01-23-2005, 01:18 PM
i think theyyre preety cool. if you mabye use some outlining or fading on the edges it would look cooler imo

FeelTheRain
01-23-2005, 02:03 PM
well he did, he feathered it. do u mean the border of the whole thing?

stxbionic42
01-23-2005, 02:06 PM
ya theyre pretty tight. good job.

bigDman
01-23-2005, 02:10 PM
added another less busy one
keep the comments comming thanks
and also i just noticed webshots scales down the pictures but i dont think the ones i attaced are scaled down

exile lacrosse
01-23-2005, 03:29 PM
those are pretty tight. i like the part with "The best feeling in the world is walking into an althletic atmosphere and knowing the other athletes are scared to death to compete against you" did you come up with that on your own? imo its quite ill.

BTlaxripper
01-23-2005, 04:27 PM
my favorite is the last one. That saying is awesome. Others have alot going on though.

OutBurst
01-23-2005, 04:28 PM
More goalie shots and you got my approval.

Those quotes don't do much so just get rid of them.

bigDman
01-23-2005, 04:39 PM
i found the quotes one google
i put up a new one

bigDman
01-24-2005, 10:01 AM
another one
http://img176.exs.cx/img176/5595/goallllll0eu.th.jpg (http://img176.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img176&image=goallllll0eu.jpg)

fujilax10
01-24-2005, 03:53 PM
im gonna have to say that the maryland one is the best and the first goalie background is cool too. but i agree with livin4lax when he says that the first too backgrounds are too cluttered. just cut down on the photos and just have a couple dominant pics.

good job

OutBurst
01-24-2005, 04:30 PM
Try using some higher quality pictures before you start to cut them up.

laxgirl45
01-24-2005, 05:06 PM
I like the one with the white background. In my opinion, the other ones are a little too busy...

bigDman
01-26-2005, 05:06 PM
thanks for the comments... what do you mean higher quility picturs

OutBurst
01-26-2005, 05:08 PM
Some of the individual pictures are blurry as hell.

bigDman
01-26-2005, 05:21 PM
ahh okay i didnt really look at them out of photo shop so i wouldnt know