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livin4lax09
02-26-2005, 03:52 PM
made this today...logo for warmup shirts. thoughts?
http://img240.exs.cx/img240/4752/unskewedjsrlogocopy3lz.th.jpg (http://img240.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img240&image=unskewedjsrlogocopy3lz.jpg)
OutBurst
02-26-2005, 03:56 PM
Meh, I am not diggin the whole tilted lacrosse and John Stark. I suggest making the lacrosse straight and eliminating the red, white, and blue bars because those just look fugly.
PompLax14
02-26-2005, 03:58 PM
I like it.
Lax101
02-26-2005, 03:59 PM
its his team colors i think.
I think its good, but the lacrosse player silouhette (sp)? looks a little retarded. I suggest a more natural looking one, like the guy in the NLL logo (but find a unique one since that'd be cheesey to use the NLL guy).
by the way, is that silouhette a pic of you? lol..i think i recognize it from the members yearbook.
Also, maybe make the font a little more "slicker"...i dont know how to describe it. Kinda a more italic-like font, but a little more then that.
Orange
02-26-2005, 09:47 PM
That's you and your Torque isn't it!
livin4lax09
02-26-2005, 11:07 PM
red white and blue are my team colors. Yes its a picture of me from a newspaper picture. No, thats when I had my fuse.As far as the font goes, I tried many many other fonts, including all of the custom ones I have on my computer, but I liked this one the best.
It looks better blown up then smaller. I think it would look better if the letters didnt get smaller as they go down. Keep the capitals bigger than the rest. I think the fading words dont go well with the red and blue stripes that dont fade. Know what I mean? Anyways jsut my two cents.
kryptic
02-27-2005, 12:22 AM
I doesn't look right, the 3 stripes of red, white, and blue stay the same. However the John Stark fades and gets smaller...
Jpettit25
02-27-2005, 07:01 AM
It looks old school the way it is now.
anjang86
02-27-2005, 11:33 AM
don't use bright colors, try something darker.
Maybe navy blue instead of that royal blue.
livin4lax09
02-27-2005, 01:27 PM
that is navy blue. It may just be the calibration on your screen though. Mine's calibrated to the standard for photography.
livin4lax09
02-27-2005, 08:28 PM
http://img87.exs.cx/img87/2208/jsrlogonew3rh.th.jpg (http://img87.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img87&image=jsrlogonew3rh.jpg)
better? or no?
Orange
02-27-2005, 08:31 PM
I like that one better. I thought the first one was pretty cool too though.
Snowman01
02-27-2005, 08:32 PM
I also like the second better.
brlacrosse50
03-02-2005, 07:50 PM
i like it alot except for the words, you shoult makethem straight and change the colors