First try at a pita

[Project X]

So, I was sick a little while ago, and stayed home for a few days. During those days I didn't have much to do so I just looked through old threads and stuff in this section of the forum, and decided I wanted to try and string some things harder than mesh, because it looked like fun. So, I ordered some stuff from Jimalax, and decided I would try a Pita for my first non-mesh. I used Kryptic's tutorial for it, and heres what I came up with:

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3782/pita16zy.th.jpg (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pita16zy.jpg)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3386/pita23lr.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pita23lr.jpg)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5643/pita31qf.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pita31qf.jpg)

What do you guys think? Any thing I can do to make it nicer without restringing the whole thing? Any tips/suggestions for my next try?

[AttackMan17]

Thats a very nice pocket for your first try at traditional.

[Monzo]

Looks good to me, but I didn't really examine it or anything. Try cleaning up that massive wad of string at the end.

[gigo567]

Did you use sidewall isntead of crosslace?

[regulate34]

nice i had a high pita in my pinched bionic for last box season it worked great

[crazydrew86]

you should tighten the middle where you twist it looks wide where the ball would sit

[bkball00]

great job i would just do something with the string at the end otherwise great job

[Hunter]

Looks really good for your first try. Just clean up the middle a little bit, it looks kinda sloppy.
That does look like sidewall....

[Enjoi LAX]

good first try

[PCHSlax5]

very good first try. Clean up that string. I know u probably feel like u will need it for some adjustments, but u wont need near that much. and obviously add some shooting strings.

[Project X]

Thanks for all the comments guys. About the wad of string, I will get rid of it soon when I cut all the strings and stuff, but I was lazy and just tied the extra center twist and inner nylons together. I will tighten up the middle, and add shooting strings soon. And, I used crosslace, it isn't sidewall.

[OULax6]

you didnt interlock your middle strings correctly, and you forgot to interlock one all together. that is the only thing wrong, the rest looks good.

[Project X]

Can you explain to me or something how to do them correctly, I'm not too sure how, I didn't even know I did them wrong. And, I see the one I didn't interlock, thank you for pointing that out I would have totally missed it.

Edit: Fixed that one non-interlocked part, put I still don't know what I did wrong on the rest of them, can anyone tell me?

[YSlax30]

looks like sidewall for the whoe thing