Firts Custom! HELP!

[OwlsLax]

Alright....this is my very first custom on my evo pro..it is extremelly sloppy and i need a lot of help. please give any comments that will help me improve on this

<a href="http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2214731020101215550noFvwK"><img src="http://thumb10.webshots.net/t/30/466/7/31/2/2214731020101215550noFvwK_th.jpg" alt="evo 2"></a>


<a href="http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2239509620101215550NVJyxC"><img src="http://thumb10.webshots.net/t/52/452/5/9/62/2239509620101215550NVJyxC_th.jpg" alt="evo"></a>

[vegasboy]

nice i like the colors , the channel looks lopsided , hows it throw

[Lacrossebum03]

Uhh More links from sidewalls to the mesh, possibly add leathers down the sides. Tighten up everything once you make more twisty links on the sides. Make a second sidewall, if you want. If I get bored, I'll string up what I'm talking about and post it.

{Edit} You've actually inspired me to create a new pocket. It will be a working off shoot of this. I'll make a mini tut to go along with it. I'm calling it the Optra Pocket. I'm not stealing your work and calling it mine, there will only be a few things that will be the same. Your pocket just gave me the idea. Look for the thread in a few hours.